JAV: When she pulled away Clark was panting and rubbing his eyes to alleviate his returned headache
. But when she kneeled down and began to think about it some more he sighed. Suddenly the creature stopped and looked at him, sweeping its gaze over his ‘sleeping’ form and lighting on his half open eyes
. . How did you like it? I added more detail and took more time
JAV: When she pulled away Clark was panting and rubbing his eyes to alleviate his returned headache
. But when she kneeled down and began to think about it some more he sighed. Suddenly the creature stopped and looked at him, sweeping its gaze over his ‘sleeping’ form and lighting on his half open eyes
. . How did you like it? I added more detail and took more time
JAV: When she pulled away Clark was panting and rubbing his eyes to alleviate his returned headache
. But when she kneeled down and began to think about it some more he sighed. Suddenly the creature stopped and looked at him, sweeping its gaze over his ‘sleeping’ form and lighting on his half open eyes
. . How did you like it? I added more detail and took more time
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